高三短文改錯精練精析

作者：蔡振全

I

If someone asks you how you can make you always 1. ________

happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him 2. ________

a proper answer. Did you remember the old saying "No 3. ________

human being can really happy who is not giving or trying 4. ________

to give happiness to others " ? If you will always think of 5. ________

taking more from others and give them less, you won't be 6. ________

able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich. 7. ________

Here's an article for you. If each of you follow it, there 8. ________

will be an end to many unhappy days of yours. So you should 9. ________

learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so. 10. ________

II

When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for 1. ________

me in last year, I felt very exited. As we all know, computers 2. ________

are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can 3. ________

be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened 4. ________

in the world on the Internet. In the past, people had to do lots of 5. ________

work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it 6. ________

instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises 7. ________

on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right 8. ________

answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare 9. ________

the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend. 10. ________

[答案與解析]

I. 1. you→yourself。 make oneself happy"使自己高興",是習慣用法。2. find後加it。 it 為形式賓語,真正的賓語是後面的不定式短語。3. Did→Do。用一般現在時表示"經常"。 4. can後加be。 情態動詞後應加動詞原形再加形容詞。5. 去掉will。6. give→giving。 giving與taking 並列作介詞of的賓語。7. even後加though或if。 even though / if為從屬連詞,意為"即使,縱然",引導讓步狀語從句。 8. follow→follows 9. 本行無錯。10. necessarily→necessary。完整形式應為when it is necessary to do so。

II. 1. 去掉me。間接賓語me已經與for構成介詞短語寫在了後面。2. 去掉in。3. usefully→useful。get後用形容詞作表語。4. that→what。what引導賓語從句且在從句中用作主語,而that不能充當賓語從句的主語。5. 本行無錯。 6. but→however。however 是副詞,並用逗號與其它詞隔開,而but為連詞,連線並列句。7. did→do。前後時態照應。8. and前的it改為them。代指前面的exercises。 9. very→more。more before構成比較結構。10. the前加for。 prepare for the exam意為"為考試作準備"。