看圖說明類作文(人教版高三英語選修八教案教學設計)
A sample
2005年 （北京卷）
美國中學生Jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學學習中文， 經協商安排住在你家。 假設你是李華， 請你給Jeff寫一封信， 按照下圖順序介紹他來中國後的生活安排。
注意： 1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。
2． 詞樹不少於60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
Brainstorm :
Topic:_________________________________________________________
Main ideas:_____________________________________________________
Key points of each picture (use one sentence to summary each picture):
Picture1________________________________________________________
Picture2_________________________________________________________
Picture3_________________________________________________________
Picture 4_________________________________________________________
Details of each picture:
Picture1________________________________________________________
Picture2_________________________________________________________
Picture3_________________________________________________________
Picture 4_________________________________________________________
Links between pictures:
_________________________________________________________________
A good ending:
_________________________________________________________________
A possible version
Dear Jeff,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dinning hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We ‘ll try our best to make your stay in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
Summary:
1. A possible structure:
A leading sentence to introduce the main idea
What to introduce in detail (according to what happens in each picture)
Orders to follow
Time order
At first, some culture lovers did Chinese Calligraphy and painting. Then some musical genius performed singing, dancing and playing the guitar. These were all highly thought of by us.
Space order
I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.(inside) The flat is in the building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straight to the school.(outside)
list (different aspects)
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. (live) Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.(transport) At noon we’ll eat at the school dinning hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. (eating) Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. (activities)
A conclusive ending (hope&plan)
I'm sure you'll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
I admire them so much that I think I should learn from them.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We ‘ll try our best to make your stay in Beijing a pleasant experience.
2. Supporting language
Time: at first, in the beginning, meanwhile, before, after, afterwards, after that, next, finally
List: as for/ when it comes to/ what’s more / another /also/in particular
Space: On the left/right; Opposite to; On one side,… on the other side; In the middle; in front of; at back of; next to
Practice
假設你是李華，剛剛參加了一箇中美中學生交流專案，在美國的中學裡你看到了一些與中國學校不同的地方。請根據圖中的資訊，以“Differences between American schools and Chinese schools”為題寫一篇短文，張貼在班級牆報的英語專欄中。詞數不少於60。
A possible version
Differences between American schools and Chinese schools
There are some differences between American schools and Chinese schools.
First, in the US, students switch classrooms for different subjects. In China, students stay in one classroom, where they have their lessons of all subjects. For lunch break, there’s only 30 minutes in American schools while in China we usually have one hour and a half to have lunch and relax. Difference can also be seen in school sports. In the US baseball is one of the most popular games and many girls go in for football, but in China basketball is our favorite sport. Football is only popular with boys and you seldom see girls playing football.
