2017年大學聯考英語寫作指導：寫人篇
寫人的英語作文在大學聯考中不少見，什麼樣的作文更能吸引人呢?下面請看語文迷為大家帶來的技巧。
寫人記敘文，一般為肖像描寫、行動描寫、語言描寫、心理描寫以及對細節的描寫，應根據要求，靈活掌握，突出重點。
【幾點注意】
1.使用正確人稱和時態。
①時態：
一般現在時--描寫人物外貌、性格、興趣等
一般過去時-- 描寫人物出生、教育背景、經歷、事蹟
②人稱：第一人稱或第三人稱
2.介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學歷、經歷、專業、愛好、特長、事蹟、性格等，包括所給的全部資訊點，不能遺漏或隨意新增。
3.對所給的資訊進行適當重組，安排好寫作順序，突出重點資訊。
4.正確運用描寫人物的詞彙和句型。
【常見詞語】
①外貌特徵：
pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big
smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, …
②性格特點：
absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent,
lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,
have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …
③童年情況：
as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,
spend his childhood in, ...
④興趣愛好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…
⑤教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s
degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …
⑥ 成就或事蹟：
become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the
Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze
medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,
concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do great determination and perseverance, ...
⑦他人評價：
an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be
considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make
great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...
例文
你班要舉辦以“Ordinary but Great”為題的英語主題班會。
請根據下列資訊準備一篇發言稿，介紹趙鬱的.成長經歷。
注意： 1、詞數不少於60。
2、文章的題目和開頭已經給出。
3、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
提示詞：首席技師 chief technician
Ordinary but Great
We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good
at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.
______________________________________
【範文】
Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical use of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.
Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.
【評析】
1.作者運用了所給出的全部資訊：姓名、職務、經歷。對所給的資訊進行了適當重組，突出了重點資訊(趙鬱的經歷)，內容完整、詳略得當，體現了話題“Ordinary but great”所表達的內容。
2. 正確使用人稱(第三人稱)，靈活使用時態(一般過去時、一般現在時);合理使用過渡詞，使文章層次分明、結構緊湊。
3. 語言規範，表達準確。文章運用了一些高階句式，如同位語、介詞短語、分詞短語、倒裝句、同位語從句等，增加了文章的亮點。
